anna
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Post by anna on Feb 17, 2006 11:46:58 GMT -5
flowers, burning, freying, falling.
he loves me, he loves me not.
petals everywhere.
my heart, burning, freying, falling.
he loves me, he loves me not.
peices everywhere
~the end~
i know it SUCKS!
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Post by agent trev on Feb 17, 2006 15:35:34 GMT -5
It was pretty good! (better than I can do anyway... ;D)
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Post by Kitty1 on Feb 18, 2006 17:24:14 GMT -5
*claps loudly* I really liked it! Do you have any other poems? I would like to read them.
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Post by Lillie on Apr 12, 2006 8:40:06 GMT -5
I say it's amazing! Short and sweet. I like it lots. More?
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